Feedback On Our Pitch And Idea

We presented our pitch to our teachers and our class. They gave us some helpful feedback so that we could improve our presentation for the real thing.

What we did well:

• Thought about genre and characters typical to the genre
• Thought about costumes and props
• Thought about possible locations
• Didn't read off the powerpoint
• Used media terminology well

Improvements and things to think about:

• Make a script and memorise what you are going to say
• Make your powerpoint presentation visually pleasing, by using pictures
• Add photographs of props, costumes and locations
• Finalise locations
• Make sure actors are reliable
• Do audience research
• Is there a modern audience for a period noir film?
• Look at Coen Brothers film: The Man Who Wasn't There